My voice like a cracking glass

Giliathriel Alquasilme
Maia Kingdom Ruler

Commander General of Arnor

I am the Lady Giliathriel, the Commander General of Arnor

Posts: 683

My voice like a cracking glass Nov 3, 2004 9:15:04 GMT 10

Post by Giliathriel Alquasilme on Nov 3, 2004 9:15:04 GMT 10

Early morning with an innocent air
i get out of bed and look out afar
the beauty so breathtaking
the birds, their song so sweet
it makes me want to sing.
I open my mouth,
and out comes a croak
it appears i just broke my windows
i clean it up, and try again
but after my china breaks, i just give up.

"There are times when you feel the world hates you. Then there are the times when it really does"

Proudly the founder of the Alquasilme Clan, first Palace Family!

ara46 Guest	My voice like a cracking glass Nov 3, 2004 11:43:58 GMT 10 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Back to Top Post by ara46 on Nov 3, 2004 11:43:58 GMT 10 I like your poem.my compliments

Giliathriel Alquasilme Maia Kingdom Ruler Commander General of Arnor I am the Lady Giliathriel, the Commander General of Arnor Posts: 683	My voice like a cracking glass Nov 5, 2004 10:30:36 GMT 10 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Giliathriel Alquasilme on Nov 5, 2004 10:30:36 GMT 10 thanks! winks
	"There are times when you feel the world hates you. Then there are the times when it really does" Proudly the founder of the Alquasilme Clan, first Palace Family!

Caewýn Alquasilme Guard of Middle Earth High Chieftain of the Mark Posts: 791	My voice like a cracking glass Nov 19, 2004 16:43:09 GMT 10 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Nov 19, 2004 16:43:09 GMT 10 aww Gili, what a poignant piece of poetry threre freond min, the metaphor works very well, it is written in an interesting style and tone that gives the piece atmoshpere. Well done!
	'At the door to my life, now the day has arrived, so loud and clear'

Giliathriel Alquasilme Maia Kingdom Ruler Commander General of Arnor I am the Lady Giliathriel, the Commander General of Arnor Posts: 683	My voice like a cracking glass Dec 9, 2004 12:51:02 GMT 10 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Giliathriel Alquasilme on Dec 9, 2004 12:51:02 GMT 10 thanks! blushes
	"There are times when you feel the world hates you. Then there are the times when it really does" Proudly the founder of the Alquasilme Clan, first Palace Family!

Goldmoon Vala Administrator and High Ruler Varda Posts: 285	My voice like a cracking glass Dec 24, 2004 13:43:32 GMT 10 Select Post Deselect Post Link to Post Member Give Gift Back to Top Post by Goldmoon on Dec 24, 2004 13:43:32 GMT 10 This thread has been closed. No more posting here.Please keep all poems to one thread as rule state. Thank you
	"A half elf, rohir lady with emerald green eyes is never early nor is she late, she arrives precisely when she means to. To not have loved is to not have lived life to its fullest."

Post by Giliathriel Alquasilme on Nov 3, 2004 9:15:04 GMT 10

Post by ara46 on Nov 3, 2004 11:43:58 GMT 10

Post by Giliathriel Alquasilme on Nov 5, 2004 10:30:36 GMT 10

Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Nov 19, 2004 16:43:09 GMT 10

Post by Giliathriel Alquasilme on Dec 9, 2004 12:51:02 GMT 10

Post by Goldmoon on Dec 24, 2004 13:43:32 GMT 10