sleep walking in a forest

[Giliathriel Alquasilme]

THe flowers rustle, harking the call
of the wind and the morning sun
the trees sway in a lazy breeze
not caring about a thing
I walk a brightly lit path,
I hum a happy tune
then fall hard on the ground
my head spinning, I get up
and look around
then I realize that I was wandering the halls
of my house
and had just tripped over my own feet

[Caewýn Alquasilme]

I love this poem! Very intriguing to read, the tone has a pang of suspense to it to mev on first read, though the second time I read through it, somewhat more light hearted.Just wondering why you opened a new thread for it though?

[Giliathriel Alquasilme]

I opened a new thread because I was tired, and I was mad at my family, so I wasn't thinking straight

[Goldmoon]

This thread has been closed..No more posting. Thank you and remember to keep all poems in one thread until full, no matter reason.