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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Oct 4, 2004 15:50:57 GMT 10
Well, I have been writing poetry for a long time now it seems, so thought I may as well have a thread to share with you all.
One Look You walked in amongst the bustle people were all around noise and movement but it became just the two of us everyone else disappeared I saw you and you saw me our eyes met nothing else mattered just us a connection true wonder true beauty.
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Oct 6, 2004 14:53:00 GMT 10
Enraptured Time passes in strange ways it seems like forever and yet only yesterday that I last saw you and I knew our paths would cross today as they did just one look said it all you just have a way of drawing me in no matter how much I try to stay away there is something about you that look I cannot escape…<br>
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Oct 12, 2004 12:50:39 GMT 10
When our eyes meet they say so much its like a moment stands still in time and there is no one else the world goes misty we see only each other just a brief second everything stops just us
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Post by Nolofinwë Oronrá on Oct 14, 2004 1:44:56 GMT 10
Good poems Caewyn you have talent
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Post by ara46 on Oct 14, 2004 3:38:48 GMT 10
my compilements on your poetry.I like them very much.
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Oct 21, 2004 13:14:48 GMT 10
The warmth and wonder that you surround me with the desperation and desire that lies within unbelievable that it is possible to feel this way such a need and a want and yet the feeling of wanting to run away all together tears me apart consumes and pushes me within and further from you.
thanks Nolo and Ara, I appreciate your comments!
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Nov 7, 2004 16:44:58 GMT 10
Time can hurt sometimes there is a way of just changing without warning carried in by the breeze and out by the sea staring
Thoughts can be cruel sometimes when they will not leave that pain that stabs like a knife straight to the heart consuming
Words can sting sometimes the sharpness of the edge that strikes deep within leaving one to wonder what happened?
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Post by Giliathriel Alquasilme on Nov 13, 2004 17:09:16 GMT 10
Ohmygod! You're really really good! *wow* Do you have an inspiration, or is it off the top of your head?
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Nov 19, 2004 16:39:51 GMT 10
And Then There Was Isn't it strange sometimes how one can feel like this when I read the words on the paper it is as clear to me it shines through the rain a light on a summer's day the simple knowing it is there enlightens life to a new level and having those feelings emerge through such simple words the pure acknowledgement puts life in a new dimension.
Gili, all of my poems are written as my life progresses, as things happen, so what you see is what is happening to me, real life, honest opinion. Thanks for the comments!
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Nov 24, 2004 15:28:04 GMT 10
Despair Learning of what has happened since the last time we met stuck a knife in my heart my breath stopped as the words sank in too much, too late too gone, too long now you leave me here alone my soul crying never ending tears what am I to do now my world is gone?
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Nov 28, 2004 12:47:17 GMT 10
The room had a strange air in it there was something different somehow familiar but still so distant there were all those people surreal one could not leave for these moments are rare the poignant state of mind works its magic.
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Post by ara46 on Nov 30, 2004 2:30:00 GMT 10
Cae your poetry is absolutely breath taking.they are soo lovely.
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Dec 14, 2004 16:55:16 GMT 10
What moments are all consuming they pull at the strings inside till they cannot hold any longer
What matters most is drifting the pain that exists cannot be ignored it moves as if to hurt even more
What once was is disappearing slipping away like sand through fingers moved because there is nothing else
Hiding where to now?
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Post by Goldmoon on Dec 24, 2004 14:03:13 GMT 10
Hello Cae, ooh and look at all the beautiful poems to. Gosh i've missed so many. Words from the heart at any given time are special indeed. Enrapture i think was my favorite. Great work freond min. *g*
ps. I've left you a message in paff to move some threads. Thanks (lots luv)
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Jan 2, 2005 14:53:40 GMT 10
thanks Goldie, I'll go and check right away!
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