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Post by Sauron (Gil) on Nov 13, 2004 15:16:08 GMT 10
A dark shadow approaches the fair halls of poetry and song. To all's suprise it is Sauron himself, his voice clear and steady as he offers a string of words not expected from a dark minion.
These are just some I had lying around or posted elsehwere. Just wanted to share! My Heart
My heart has gone ’tis flown away My heart has gone to save the day!
My heart has gone to sandy soil My heart has gone where blood does boil. My heart has gone with fatigues pressed My heart has gone his sins confessed.
My heart has gone I miss his face My heart has gone with measured pace.
My heart has gone his breath is cold My heart has gone my grief untold.
My heart has gone…<br>
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Post by Giliathriel Alquasilme on Nov 17, 2004 14:31:06 GMT 10
Wow! *applauds* Nicely done!
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Post by Goldmoon on Dec 6, 2004 11:40:59 GMT 10
Quite a poem you have here.My Heart speaks of a love for truth and wanting to end all things bad. I loved the way you rhymed this poem. The continueous My Heart didn't make it to repetitive but more showed the feelings you were trying to get across. Very nice poem and i hope to see more.^_^
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Post by Morgoth on Jan 7, 2005 0:45:20 GMT 10
Quite a nice poem from someone so evil *wink*... Really, it was a great job, and I hope to see more of the same around here soon!
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