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Post by merrybrandytook on Oct 4, 2004 23:31:54 GMT 10
Ok here's my fave of all I've written, I like it so much I have even turned it into a piccy and have it framed in my living room - Charlotte Rose
There she lies, so beautiful So small and perfect and new She shouldn't be here at all And I know her days will be few
She arrived early and stole my heart She cannot live, too young and delicate I don't want to say goodbye Don't want her to leave me yet
She's dying in my arms And no-one even knows I have to say goodbye now I love you, my little Charlotte Rose and if you want to see the presentation of it it's here - img.photobucket.com/albums/v104/leathers22000/charlotte_rose.jpg
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Post by Nolofinwë Oronrá on Oct 16, 2004 0:46:08 GMT 10
Verry good
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Post by Morgoth on Oct 23, 2004 14:27:06 GMT 10
wow! That is beautiful! What a wonderful poem!
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Post by ara46 on Oct 28, 2004 1:36:48 GMT 10
I love your poem. my compliments
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Nov 19, 2004 16:49:43 GMT 10
aww, how sweet and beautiful, a really refreshing read freond min, well written, lovely atmosphere surrounds it, it almost glows off the screen! *waits for more
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Post by Goldmoon on Dec 24, 2004 13:48:58 GMT 10
Ahh such a beautiful poem dear. I see the message there as well. Perhaps a child born giving you so much of a gift then taken away for some reason or another. I can see why you would frame it. As the greatest gift of all is indeed life. Superior wording and a very nice tribute to them. Well done and very well spoken.
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