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Post by ara46 on Oct 12, 2004 6:33:45 GMT 10
hi all this is something I wrote a couple of days ago.
Aroura Wanderer. Aroura wanders through the night Searching vainly for the light. She sits upon the lonely shore Watching for that ancient door.
The starlight falls upon her face But still she remains in that place. Aroura wanders through the ages Like a book that tells of time's distant pages.
She will return one day But still she must stay. As the light grows Still paler she goes. Aroura Wanderer.
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Post by Nolofinwë Oronrá on Oct 16, 2004 0:50:03 GMT 10
Ara46 you have talent, come on, it's verry good
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Nov 19, 2004 16:52:17 GMT 10
Ara, I really enjoyed reading that, short but full of wonder and intrigue. Rather poignant, but it draws you in. *patiently waits for more
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Post by ara46 on Nov 24, 2004 6:22:54 GMT 10
thank you Cae and Nolofinwe.*smiles* this one I've been working on a little bit. The wish. This is what I have to say It is not explainable in any other way. I wish the world was a better place Every thing has a different face. Some are good.Some are bad.
A light of love breaks forth Keeping the evil at bay. Angels fly away.Demons are lost. Who really counts the cost? I have spoken.I have now said. What keeps you here is all in force of will,Wether used for good or ill. Sorry if it's rather dark.I'm going through a bit of a hard time right now.
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Nov 24, 2004 15:30:57 GMT 10
its just amazing to read something that you can associate so closely with, so real and deep, honest and heartfelt.
5 pts awarded!
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Post by Goldmoon on Nov 27, 2004 19:57:45 GMT 10
Ara..This first poem of yours rhymed very well and the image i perceived from it were a girl sitting on a beach looking into the night sky wanting to hold on to that light forever. Nicely done. Your second one the top two lines rhymed good as well, nice thoughts here to. It would be rather nice if all thougth that way to. Keep up the good job.
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Post by ara46 on Nov 29, 2004 7:32:41 GMT 10
Thank you both.I'm kind of going through a bit of a rough time and this is the only way I have to say it.hope you like this. The healing... Peace desends upon a plane Chao's and hurt are falling like rain. The people cry out The hurt and the doubt are with in and with out..
Signs of life are springing up Healing begins.stars up above.. A long lost nature of man.. Finding themselves if they can. Healing done.The feelings of love return.
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Nov 29, 2004 14:01:05 GMT 10
aww Ara, we hope it all gets better for you soon dear, take care, poetry is a great way to let it all out.
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Post by Queen Arwen on Dec 7, 2004 13:26:40 GMT 10
Yes sweets life seems to be in a rough spot for you right now, tis why you have all of us here and especially me to help you though those times. I'm available whenever ya need if only just to talk. I'm a very good listener as well. Your poem spoke of saddness but a hope in the end. This is good, we all need hope to go another day. I wish you well and we will talk soon, Here's a box of chocolate for ya, to help you stay sweet. ^_^
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Post by ara46 on Dec 8, 2004 4:32:28 GMT 10
aww that is so sweet.I think I'll make another poem for you guys. Friends. I who have friends need not be sad. Like Goldmoon who is as sweet as can be. Seles who is a friend who is closest to me. Lith who is strong and kind almost has my frame of mind. Erkendorn who is wise in his kind. Cae who is a poet who knows her way. To have friends such as you guys honor is the highest form. I wrote this poem to say "Thank you all"and I appreciat your help on my poetry.and Merry Chirstmas to you all.
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Post by Queen Arwen on Dec 8, 2004 4:51:51 GMT 10
Aww I guess that chocolate really worked then? This is very sweet and i know Goldmoon will like it to as much as i. "winks' The rhyming is good, and the use of words is very nice. I'm sure all here will love it. I think its very nice to think ot them this way. Wonderful dear..Hope to see more ^_^
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Post by ara46 on Dec 15, 2004 5:55:14 GMT 10
here's another one beware it's kind'a dark but it's an ok poem. The Light Ends. When the light ends I hope I still live, Just give me my time and my gifts to give. As the light fades still darker it grows, May I still live before the light goes. Seeking my friends and biding my time, This is the end of my little ryhme.
I dont know how this'll be taken by some.but you've hopefully read my warning.
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Post by Caewýn Alquasilme on Dec 15, 2004 8:39:23 GMT 10
wow, once more, you have written such open, heartfelt work tis what I love most about this thread, it seems so sincere and true, beautiful.
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Post by ara46 on Dec 16, 2004 2:30:44 GMT 10
*smiles and bows*Thanks Cae.
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Post by ara46 on Dec 22, 2004 5:13:26 GMT 10
this is more of a song then a poem but it ryhme's nonetheless. Looking for myself. I dont ever think I should stay, But I dont have any other way, I wish I could see myself, But I cant,
Lost without a path, On a different plane, I and only I can ease my pain, This is my last way to see my past,
Please God help me to see, This pain that is growing in me, I beg you,I pray, Help me to find my way...
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