Post by Goldmoon on Apr 3, 2005 14:49:28 GMT 10
You are really getting good with these self expressions of yours. Tis good to get them out somehow whether it's poetry or just a journal. I really liked this one. The rhyming was good in alot of areas and if i'm not mistaken, it speaks of perhaps someone like a male you have tried to like and he broke your heart some. it also seems that there are others (friends) involved as well and they either didn't like how or why things happened. Perhaps the answer is there to all and all you must do is look beyond the mirror to see yourself and know its you that must me the main concern first and formost. 'hugs' Excellent poem sweetie.